It may have taken me a week to find enough free time to read this comic but I am SO glad I did. The comic is excellent, brilliant even: facial expressions, quirky jokes, insider reference, theme, setting, tone I could go on for hours about the things I thought was done perfectly, and amazing I don’t think I have one complaint.
The whole set up feels like something you find in old literature like The Divine Comedy and the works of Plato; the tone is dark and at times horrifying but there is ‘always’ leads back to a good outcome. The story telling is deep and inquisitive, it plot reveals a sort of understanding I’ve only found in true scholars. I’ve grown tired of today’s media (and writings) where the hero dies at the end or loses someone dear to them; like a happen ending is something only found in a poorly writing books or Disney movies. I like to think there is a God, and with that anything is possible; including happy endings but I digress. Here we have the good and the bad, highs and lows but them (the characters) always returns home at the end of the day (please don’t change thatJ). It’s sometimes said that “the threat of a blow (a hit) is at times just as efficient as the hit itself,” your comic is great with this. Twilight, Big Mac and even Starflare, I felt my heart sink when I thought they passed (and command writers would have left it there) but you brought them back (except Starflare but his story is a sad one for many roads ).
The characters all have souls (true personality) with the pros and cons of a soul. This is something I’ve found only in the best writings and works of well renowned authors. The fact that I just so happen to have stumble upon this work shocks me, I would think it would all other the net like MLP – Friendship is Witchcraft . This parody isn’t just a joke or a fan-made clop fest (which I have absolutely no problem with), it’s art. Something you’ve put your heart and soul into and it shows.
I know all too well the say “all good things come to a end,” but I’m hoping I will continue. The story is long but it’s still so very good. I know a few very talented people like yourself and one thing we all seem to have in command is the lack of follow-through. We (and I) get bored with large projects and at times fail to see them through; I’m hoping you don’t care that trait. This project maybe over two hundred pages deep but it’s all gold, and shows no sign of decay.; and dear I say, I’m betting if you started to make people pay to get more, they would pay. Post your comic up on other sites too, like Equestria After Dark, Equestria Daily, other’s have posted and are now funded for their work (like the creators of Hoof Beat and ??? sorry forgot).
Once again, thank you for creating this and giving it life; you’ve given this darken soul a little light. Oh and, please forgive me for any spelling or grammar mistakes, I’m just a bit sleep deprived. Peace