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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (C) Hasbro/Lauren Faust
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:iconstorybrooke-writes:
Storybrooke-Writes Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm just guessing here, since this is my first time reading this, that Starflare will be the one to sacrifice his life to destroy the stone.
Ties in with the "If I succeed, I won't be able to see you again." Idk, just a thought.
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1228248 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
ah, so the starswirl in the crown was just tellapathicly communing with twilight while she was knocked out.
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:iconkhai2000:
Khai2000 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Writer
What if Starflare kiss Twilight????
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:iconmetal-kitty:
Metal-Kitty Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
... the f**k is wrong with you?
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:iconkhai2000:
Khai2000 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Writer
Sorry sir
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:iconmirtar34:
mirtar34 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In panel 4, the broken "what now"? its  a bit difficult to interpret it. 
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:iconmetal-kitty:
Metal-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
Eh? It doesn't say that anywhere in this page, let alone panel 4 :I
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:iconmirtar34:
mirtar34 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In panel 4, when twilight looks like she's sitting in a pond, it says in a sentence in the speech bubble "the broken" I'm not sure whether the word is stallion or what after that?
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:iconmetal-kitty:
Metal-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
stallion.
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:iconrecon1996:
Recon1996 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
(takes hat off head) With great power comes great responsibility.
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:iconandaverde:
andaverde Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Blue blood! i vote blue blood!

but wow talk about harsh but i cant wait for the next parts :D
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:iconbluebell5656:
bluebell5656 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol, I vote blueblood too!
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:iconandaverde:
andaverde Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
yeah! >:D
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:iconbluebell5656:
bluebell5656 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student General Artist
lol!
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:iconpedhofrat:
pedhofrat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
remind me to a movie that i forgot the name.
or... maybe a deja-vu ?
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:iconailestrike2331:
ailestrike2331 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Mmmmm, delicious. I smell a happy ending on the way.
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:iconwhitewolfstormrunner:
WhitewolfStormrunner Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, let's hope so.
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:iconmetal-kitty:
Metal-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Also, for the record? That's a very impolite thing you did.  In case you don't understand. :)
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:iconkingbo0:
KingBo0 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, not hatin, jus wonderin.
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:iconmetal-kitty:
Metal-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
DEEENIIIIIED! :D
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:iconwhitewolfstormrunner:
WhitewolfStormrunner Featured By Owner Edited Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
How do you mean?

NOT that I want any spoilers (she said with a totally straight face), but please, TELL me it's NOT Twilight who dies in this.  She...and the whole gang...have gone through WAY too much in this as it is.

I don't think that Applejack could take loosing her leader and friend again for real this time, for one. 

*sighs in soft resignation* But IF that happens, I just want you to know that I'll be VERY disappointed, but this is YOUR story, and you know what's going to ultimately happen in it, so, whatever DOES happen, I, like the REST of your readers and fans, am with you to the end of this.

Still and all, I just hope that she DOES live.

*crosses fingers for just that, and stays cautiously optimistic*
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Metal-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Hm? This had nothing to do with spoilers. :O Someone made a half-assed comment on my work and then left a link to their gallery asking to check them out.  'Tis a very unappreciated practice.
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:iconwhitewolfstormrunner:
WhitewolfStormrunner Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, okay.  I guess that I misunderstood then.

And you're right; THAT is just plain RUDE!
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:iconkingbo0:
KingBo0 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuuuuuuuu!
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:iconwhitewolfstormrunner:
WhitewolfStormrunner Featured By Owner Edited Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait, WHAT?!

Oh, no.  Nonononono...NO!!!  After EVERYTHING that Twilight (ESPECIALLY her!) and her friends have through in this thing; her being attacked, faking her death; etc.; Star Swirl can-NOT just drop this one on her and expect her to basically tell them,"Hey, guess what, guys?  Our Elements won't WORK against the Dark Crown 'cause they'll think IT'S the REAL Element of Magic, and won't work against it to destroy it and Harvest.  Sooooo, according to the spirit of Star Swirl the Bearded, I gotta sacrifice myself for everypony else in Equestria and die for REAL this time.  Sorry 'bout that.  I love you and tell Shining and Mom and Dad I love them, too."

Because in all honesty (glares at the smirking Applejack), I don't think that ANY of them are going to TAKE that too well!!!

Metal, bud, you know I love you, but I sincerely hope that this is NOT what this is leading up to after all this: that Twilight is going to have to die to stop Harvest, and see to the total and final destruction of him AND that blasted Crown.

No matter WHAT happens, though, I'm with this story...and you...to the (hopefully not) bitter end.

I just hope that there's ANOTHER twist that saves her.  Something just tells me that Star Flare AIN'T quite as "broken" as Star Swirl THINKS he is.
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KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
NO!
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Drakenhof Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Starflare needs a redemption, and we know he will not survive this story. For me, it´s clear who is going to sacrifice himself.

Derpy


xD
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SonAze9000 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
I had a feeling Metal-Kitty would make a twist like this. It is just his style.
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:iconsilval58:
Silval58 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
So...how is Twilight going to make him want that stone destroyed? *Thinks evil thoughts*
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ashbluebear Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope that the guy wielding this thing will want it dead for a second and he will destroy it and die.
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:iconsilval58:
Silval58 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
That would work to everyone's advantage!
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:iconashbluebear:
ashbluebear Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah. Bad guy dead no extra sacrifices, the world becomes good again.
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:iconlegate47:
Legate47 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, it was nice knowing you Twilight. :(
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:iconazreal258:
AZREAL258 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
That is so wrong.
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:iconshadowwing09:
ShadowWing09 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
....shite....
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student General Artist
mmmm no me jodas...


so gonna be a sad ending...
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:iconviczhn:
viczhn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
i dont know why, but i always feel exited while watching TS crying or in some desperate situation...
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JinseiKyuzai Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Like I said, there are so many loose ends that have not been tied yet, AND many potential "heroes", plus M-K is a competent writer, and he wouldn't just kill off a canon character like this......not to mention that Metal-Kitty loves to give us a twist a minute (I mean all that in a good way).
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BlueBeacon Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
this is so messed up yet I want to read more!
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:iconduo-maxwell39180:
duo-maxwell39180 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Moar ponies!
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Raven: Well, I dunno about the broken stallion...... After all, villains usually get wrecked by their most trusted associates.
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:iconbcmorgan96:
bcmorgan96 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Writer
Twilight can't die.
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:iconrazorjoint:
RazorJoint Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
This is like the seen where Optimus Prime sees Alphatrion within the Matrix of Leadership in Transformers Prime
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:iconarne95:
arne95 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Sometimes you're an asshole! But i will read this comic till the end!
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:iconultradj4ever:
ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Die for a second time? I don't think her friends will like that.
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:iconwhitewolfstormrunner:
WhitewolfStormrunner Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me, neither.

However, knowing Metal, we're gonna get yet ANOTHER plot twist before it (the sacrifice) actually happens.  

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Bring it, bro!!!
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ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Yeah, I don't think Twilight's just going to die again, but something will happen that will leave us and the cast in tears
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WhitewolfStormrunner Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I certainly HOPE not, but I just have the sinking feeling that you're right.

Just have to wait and see, I guess.

I also hope that Star Swirl is wrong about Star Flare NOT being the one who stops Harvest, like I said.  But, again, we'll just have to wait and see.

On ANOTHER note, I just wonder how they'll all react when she tells them what happened between her and Star Swirl's spirit, ESPECIALLY Princess Luna.

Again, I guess that we'll just have to wait and see, huh?

Hope it isn't too long tile the next update.  Metal my bro, what ARE you up to with all this?!
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ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
He hasn't disappoint us before, so let's be patient and wait, he's a good guy telling a good story
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